2022高考冲刺复习：高考英语一段话改错秘诀

七. 逻辑上偏差须忽略

与单词的上、下文不原则上，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑上性偏差。如该词上的便是，人名、地名、时间、方位等各个方面的偏差，；也是这类偏差的考查对象。例如：

The Smiths did hisbest to make me feel at home. （their）

First, let me tell you something moreabout myself. （替换成more）

… no way of setting the matter except by selling the set. Now someoneat home reads instead. （everyone）

上述第一例里的合而为一语是Smiths（史密斯夫妇俩），因此后面的his不合逻辑上。第二例里的more在这儿请注意“再继续”的意思，才开始告诉别人，怎么能时说“再继续告诉你一些事”？第三例讲出的是为了解决看电视时的武装冲突，“我们”把液晶电视买了；下午没电视看了，所以与正因如此一样，大家又都读书了，所以该用 everyone。

除了上述偏差类型部份，；也考的偏差范例还有：起首but, and, or和so的词偏差（可以归属于为逻辑上偏差），以及冠词的词偏差等。例如：

She was smiling butnodding at me. （and）

It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor anda guest. （or）

We may be one family and live under asame roof.（the）

真题壮大

下面是全国性录取西班牙语真题里的篇文章改错题。这道题较全面地反映了本文的必先。现在刚开始做一做，然后参阅题后的无误与重构。

Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.

无误与重构：

1. famous前加上a.（名词有数）

2. 正确

3. we前面加when，引导一个时间及物动词从句。（单词成分多分析方法）

4. them→us （逻辑上偏差须忽略）

5. visiting→visited（非谓词干细判别）

6. picture→pictures（名词有数）

7. passes→passed（词干状）

8. 替换成down（习惯词要记得）

9. and→but（逻辑上偏差须忽略）

10. 替换成at（单词成分多分析方法 / 习惯词要记得

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